Awwwww! :D This is exactly what I was hoping for! As I said, they're so so so obvious, and I wish there was more fic about them, especially well-written fic like yours! I love how you wrote them, how incredibly shy they are with each other (when it matters) even though they've known each other for so long. Those compliments about each others' clothing probably took all their courage, and it was so adorable. I loved the dialogue in general because it says so much about them and their relationship (not-yet-relationship? XD) with each other, and also because you wrote it in Spanish, which makes it all the more authentic. I could almost hear them talk! It was brilliant. The most brilliant part of this, however, was definitely shy!Andrés suddenly not being shy at all, and I totally 'aww'ed out loud when he confessed his Dutch courage, because OMG, that is so adorable. :D I could glomp them both because obviously they're made for each other. :D
Thank you so much for this!! I'm all asquee, so please forgive me if I'm not exactly coherent here. :D
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Date: 2010-01-07 08:38 pm (UTC)Thank you so much for this!! I'm all asquee, so please forgive me if I'm not exactly coherent here. :D
*glomptackles you*
*adds this to memories*
*wanders off, grinning like an idiot* :D